Comments on Lit Review Drafts

You have the basic layout of the paper right now, but you are not explaining the findings of each study and the purpose of each study. Look back at the student sample literature review. Notice how the studies are explained under the Review of Literature section. Your paper should be modeled on that. Because you have so many sources under each theme, that is going to make your paper a lot longer. The page limit is 10 pages, so you may not want to discuss so many studies under each theme. Once you have explained the findings from studies, then use some of the comparisons (synthesis) you have in your paper right now. Carefully review all of my comments directly on your paper as you revise.